*sob sob* it's me again... Can I ask for your permission to use of the backgrounds? *Sob sob* I'm feeding myself with contents about this 🥹🥹🥹 This feels like I'm wasting your time 😫

This game is NOT leaving my mind at all :C also can you tell Mr Fairy to be bald instead? D: (I have a love and hate with his hair) also I draw this for fun so it's kinda ugly... He's also not very detailed so...

I have questions, wow I actually have questions wowza... I was so excited when I saw two pics of their biology 🥺 (is it still called a biology if they're not biological?) I might sound dumb or stupid with some of these questions, especially because I read what you provided about Angelicals, ahem, when you said "Cherry Flavored Filled Candy" is that a joke? 🤔 Cause if it's not I'd happily eat it 😋 Since they have a CPU those that mean that if that is destroyed or damage, can they still be repair back to what they originally are like? (I know nothing about computer) What's more important between their Core and CPU? is the one on the picture for Dominions is Fairy? Dumb question, what branch does this game fall under? This will sound super dumb but how does their hive mind works exactly? Like do they just share information to each other? Am I missing something cause I don't know what the cosmic silly strings are :^ I feel like I just missed a page... These next questions are more on a silly imagination ones, like "what if" type of situation, cause this game has been in my mind for so long please get it out 🥺 How would Fairy react to the MC cosplaying as him? 🤔 Would the game go in a different direction if the MC was a male instead? What is Fairy's (or others) reaction (or opinion if he can) about the complexity of human relationship and preference? (Mostly sexuality, physical attraction, one sided love, and other complex relationships) Btw why is Fairy called Fairy anyway? I have more questions actually, I just forgot most of them...COCONUT >:D 

Wowza....I just now found out about this game? Wow I'm missing out a lot of stuff... Anyways, am I the only one who finds Fairy fascinating? Like not in a romantic way, I mean sure he's handsome in his own way, quite attractive if I do say so mayself, but! That's not my point, I think I found him fascinating in a "I want to dissect and study him" kind of way, mostly because of the part where we inspected him and we saw what's inside his mouth and I was like "wow....is that thing in the middle what gives him voice? What gives what his voice?" And then my thoughts kinda just spiral down to many questions like "what makes him think? How does he think? How does he have a personality? How does he decides what and what not? How is he his own individual? What makes him an individual? Is what he is his choice or is that how he is made? If so then is he what he truly what he chooses to be?" I could go on more from his physical body to psychological, I think I was stuck in that scene for almost an hour too, I was THAT fascinated, I want to learn what makes him him, what ticks him to do what and what not, AAAAAA so curious!!! T-T I could talk more about Fairy and my very strange fascination of him but it's so late here rn and I need sleep for tomorrow so, good game! Makes me wanna crave more similar games like this (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧

I love fairy so much I need to put him in a jar and shake him around like a bug

Visuals are very slick! Very cool for being made in 17 days. I do wish that more choices mattered, and it was clear that lots of dialogue just assumed you picked one option, but I can respect not wanting to sweat over the details for a game made in a couple weeks. I had fun!

EXCELLENT GAME CRRN!!!!!!!!!!

Typos: 

Fairy at the start of the game says achiving

On the choices talking to demon there is a "better then"

Saying Wild Men to Angel, it answers with Carpe Dium, which I'm very inclined to believe was meant to be Carpe Diem, but disregard it if intentional.

Question:

Choosing to shoot joy has no gunshot and the text goes saying it steps away, but the dialogue it says implies (to me) that it is accepting that you'll kill it and just openly taking the shot. Did I interpret the tone wrong?

Review:

I think Dennis and Ending 5 Variation 1 were pretty interesting events, and the player character's past and future is intriguing, so I appreciate the two main characters to say the least.

Me-ism and Deer given the chance to be reocurring could also grow on me, I think. If the game expanded, I think a good approach would be killing, letting in and shooing away, killing ending a story there, while letting in and shooing open different branches (letting in being a domino effect and shooing letting the character revisit later and allow you to continue their plotline).

Spare Llulla route when, Pharaoh?

Not letting suspicious elements in not resulting in a different conclusion is a bit upsetting, many choices resulting in the same dialogues ditto, so as a VN I can't praise it too much, since I'd rather it just be static except for the bad end choices. Demon in particular, when you say "sounds better than here" still reacts as if you're refusing him, and then angel praises your steadfastness, so it feels very incongruent. Fairy talking about his crown seems like setup for how shooting him in the head ought to lead somewhere, but it wasn't the case either. 

SFX-wise, I only wish characters had footsteps (it's unintentionally quite comedic when fairy just zooms away on the first night) and thus some characters that arent really walking could stand out as even more uncanny.

Art: lovely. the eyes and skin are such normal inspections while the mouth is so borderline fetishistic really transmits well how invasive it is to inspect someone's mouth as opposed to the rest. As gameplay it didn't feel very flexible, but artistically and narratively, it was used very well.

(I read the page better as I wrote this, and now I presume it isn't a project you'll continue working on going forward, so my criticisms on expanding the game may be worthless presently, but a worth a penny in a future project, deo volente.)